I hear you, I SO hear you - but I was sick to death of having Tony do all the talking. ;) That's going to narrow down, now that more words are coming out overall. This is something that got 15 minutes of my time at a crack - what you get with that is a lot of reading the same ground over and over, tweaking it to death - I was getting sick of this piece.

A couple of hours, and things got a whole lot more fun. Thanks for the advice!